The high-volt deadbolt barbwirespeak and pirate copied patois of Andrew Zawackis third collection, Petals of Zero, Petals of One, uploads landscape into language so that the exterior turns internal. These poems ricochet at dizzying speeds: the books three long sequences include Georgia, a Philippe Soupault-inspired apostrophe to everythings dirty and doubled in Zawackis alasless, vowellewd adopted home state; Arrows shadow, a bionic hymn of modemsong and binaural breath; and Storm, lustral: unevensong, which swims ahead of an / undertow to watch birds filibuster a poplar. But, like the work of Louis Zukofsky and William Carlos Williams that Zawacki cites, they often cohere via tenderness, believing the heart is an ideogram. This interest in the phylum of love isnt trite, both because of Zawackis intelligence (to the ergo- / nomic echo / -lalia hopscotching dis- / junc / -ture and junk) and because, like good surrealism, it is motivated by desire our world is hard-pressed to match. I love watching Zawacki press hard in return. Here, the propulsive stammer of if onlyif only the electric lines / if only the birds if / only the birds / sequencingforges illuminating transformations: if only the wrens as bottle rocket / as pinball eave to eave / the mornings gramophone and booting up. When conventional sense breaks down, these illuminations shimmer more brightly, as though true perception requires disintegration, like rings advancing radaresque in a pond where a pebble // snapped the surface. This theme is also method: the books enjambment, in true-or-false- / tto, crackles fiercely (language is silences stop / -gap // its umbra and opening umbrel- / la / la / la / la / la). Such agility, rapunzeling up on a fidgety draft, acts out Zawackis variation on Zukofskys famous linguistic formula (Lower limit speech / Upper limit music): from upper level lower / us down . . . / to lower level levitate.
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Zach Savichs first book of poems, Full Catastrophe Living, won the 2008 Iowa Poetry Prize. His recent work appears in Denver Quarterly, Kenyon Review, Notnostrums, Bat City Review, and the anthology Best New Poets 2008.
Zach Savich,
Little Evidence of the Bees,
The Adult Longeing Guide